Hey! Really enjoyed checking out the game. There's a lot of cool potential here, especially with the multiple endings (loved that touch!). Just wanted to share a few bits of feedback that might help with polish:
The overall lighting is a bit dark, it was hard to see in some areas.
I got stuck at the room door when in a certain position and had to restart the game.
If you interact with the dad before he’s in position when you get out of the car, it causes the game to freeze.
Some dialogue felt a little too long, trimming them slightly might help pacing.
After picking up the flashlight and key, the stamina bar disappeared, not sure if that was intentional.
Got stuck in the office after talking to the manager and couldn’t open the door.
Overall though, the branching endings were a great idea and added a nice layer of replay value. Excited to see how the game evolves!
Thanks so much for the feedback! Do you remember which room you got stuck in? And did the manager's door not open when you followed one of the parents into the office, or were you in there alone?
I definitely should have had more playtesters, the ones I had on hand kind of had to be walked through anyway since they're not big gamers. Will try to figure something else out in the future!
Yeah no worries! I got stuck in the room with the phone when I walked into the corner near the door, I couldn’t move anymore. In the manager’s office, I followed the mum in, but she left while I was still inside and the door wouldn’t open after that.
If you ever need more playtesters, I’d be happy to help out!
Awesome, thank you again! I have anothwr gsme pretty far along so I'll probably you up with that offer sometime.
Will have to figure out what's wrong with that corner, haven't run into that before, but I did know about the manager office's door. Didn't think anyone would follow the mom or dad in there, which is definitely my bad lol.
No problem at all! And yeah, if you can’t replicate the corner bug, I wouldn’t worry too much about it, might’ve just been a weird one-off. Looking forward to checking out your next game when it’s ready to test!
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Thanks for playing! Sorry for the falling out of the map bug and excess dialogue, will go in and fix some of that. Still learning 😅
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Hey! Really enjoyed checking out the game. There's a lot of cool potential here, especially with the multiple endings (loved that touch!). Just wanted to share a few bits of feedback that might help with polish:
Overall though, the branching endings were a great idea and added a nice layer of replay value. Excited to see how the game evolves!
Thanks so much for the feedback! Do you remember which room you got stuck in? And did the manager's door not open when you followed one of the parents into the office, or were you in there alone?
I definitely should have had more playtesters, the ones I had on hand kind of had to be walked through anyway since they're not big gamers. Will try to figure something else out in the future!
Yeah no worries! I got stuck in the room with the phone when I walked into the corner near the door, I couldn’t move anymore. In the manager’s office, I followed the mum in, but she left while I was still inside and the door wouldn’t open after that.
If you ever need more playtesters, I’d be happy to help out!
Awesome, thank you again! I have anothwr gsme pretty far along so I'll probably you up with that offer sometime.
Will have to figure out what's wrong with that corner, haven't run into that before, but I did know about the manager office's door. Didn't think anyone would follow the mom or dad in there, which is definitely my bad lol.
No problem at all! And yeah, if you can’t replicate the corner bug, I wouldn’t worry too much about it, might’ve just been a weird one-off. Looking forward to checking out your next game when it’s ready to test!
By the way, I loved Signal Lost. So eerie! You're great at building atmosphere.